Persuasive writing

Persuasive writing

In my opinion, I do not understand who does not not want to live
in this house because it has a great view of the mountains and the sun ,
it is so quiet and peaceful there, you could start a great farm on the beautiful land,
the house already has a fire and great insolation made from grass.

 The house is very beautiful and antique, the stone
walls surrounding the area is more natural like than
the common wood fences.It could give a fresh smell from
the plants that could grow on it. The house has
even got a fireplace to keep you warm on the cold
rainy nights. I would love to live here and I believe
everyone should at least try staying here and i think
it would be a lovely experience.

The view of the outside would be beautiful you
would see the gigantic mountains and the mysterious
and wonderful wildlife,The noises of the wilderness would
relax you. the rocks from the beach would let you extend the wall
for any pets that you want to keep in. The open mountains mean
that you would get a lot of sunlight and rain, meaning
planting fruits and vegetables would not be a bad idea
would it? And you could roast and use them in soups.

You could buy a ship and set sail to fish or set traps
overnight and to maybe catch some lobsters or crabs.
The dried leaves around the house could easily burn
up and fuel your fireplace.You could maybe set up
a rain collector to boil your vegetables, fruit and meat.
There would be no chemicals polluting your crops, it
would just be pure nature growing your crops making
it more healthy.

The amount of isolation is extraordinary it's so quiet you can hear the waves,
wind and the singing of the birds, there are no cars stinking up the place with
their fumes, no people smoking or throwing their bottles away and the only
trash that is there is your own.

I would not think of anyone that does not want to live
here there is a view of the mountains and the sun, the
sea would be a great source of meat from fishing, the
land would be great to farm vegetables and fruits, the
amount of silence is so peaceful all you hear is the
wind, birds and waves.