Bad Boy Bastion - The chinatown travesty SCHOOL STORYBOARD
we made a story involving our experiences in our end of term holiday with a twist of fantasy for example there is my father as a giant in the pictures,
Hi Jorgen its Peter here. Your holiday looks very interesting. I like the fact you said that you are going to have a fit. Next time could you explain who the giant is😀😎😈.
Hello Jorgen Izaak here. It looks like you had a interesting holaday. Next time you might want to add a little more detail on your post. I like the way you have ladout your storyboard. Sometimes my Mum or Dad have to tell me to go and have a run around outside.
hi Jorgen its me lochy your holiday looks very intreseting i like how your dad is a big giant and he is very angry also i think your storyborad is funny by Lochy
Hi Lochy i am very thankful for your comment and what you think about my work, is there anything that i can improve?, please tell me if there is. -Jorgen
Hi Jorgen its Peter here. Your holiday looks very interesting. I like the fact you said that you are going to have a fit. Next time could you explain who the giant is😀😎😈.
ReplyDeleteit my dad and my dad angry
Deletehi jorgen its logun i like it its also funny 😈😈😈
DeleteHello Jorgen Izaak here. It looks like you had a interesting holaday. Next time you might want to add a little more detail on your post. I like the way you have ladout your storyboard. Sometimes my Mum or Dad have to tell me to go and have a run around outside.
ReplyDeletebonjour Jorgen this Alex from Paparoa Range School. I like how you had a fit. you should make your writing larger for next time. By Alex
ReplyDeleteMerci Alex
Deletei am thankful that you have enjoyed it, and yes i also thought my writing was too small thank you for your opinion.
- Jorgen
hi Jorgen its me lochy your holiday looks very intreseting i like how your dad is a big giant and he is very angry also i think your storyborad is funny by Lochy
ReplyDeleteHi Lochy
Deletei am very thankful for your comment and what you think about my work, is there anything that i can improve?, please tell me if there is.
-Jorgen