Hello Jorgen. I like the way you have done the layout for your show not tell post so we can read it nice and clearly. I like how you have described the emotions and what it looks like when people do these emotions. They are short but not boring to read. Next time you might want to add more detail of what you have been learning about show not tell. Thanks Izaak
Hi Logun thank you for your response, but i don't really like colour that much, the rainbow backgrounds really hurt my eyes and makes it hard to read for me. - Jorgen
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ReplyDeleteHello Jorgen. I like the way you have done the layout for your show not tell post so we can read it nice and clearly. I like how you have described the emotions and what it looks like when people do these emotions. They are short but not boring to read. Next time you might want to add more detail of what you have been learning about show not tell. Thanks Izaak
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ReplyDeleteI like your show not tell and you could put some colour in.😃😃🚀🚀😈
Hi Logun thank you for your response, but i don't really like colour that much, the rainbow backgrounds really hurt my eyes and makes it hard to read for me. - Jorgen
DeleteThis comment has been removed by the author. thank you izaak for your response i will try my best next time.
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