Bad Boy Bastion - The chinatown travesty SCHOOL STORYBOARD

we made a story involving our experiences in our end of term holiday with a twist of fantasy for example there is my father as a giant in the pictures,

Pros and cons of the great walk

Pros and Cons 

of THE GREAT WALK

by

Jorgen and Gaitau

Cons

It Costs $11 Million To construct the Great walk

Very Sadly There Are No Dogs Allowed :(

6-8 Hour Car Ride from beginning to end *vomit warning*

Near Pike river mine where 29 people died in a series of explosions which means scary ghosts.

The construction was delayed till December 2019

More rubbish from tourists and locals

More crowded and harder to travel around the town

More tourists means more car fumes polluting the town

PROS

There are bed Huts that you could rent to buy to spend the night in.

The money gained from the Great walk, is going to be used to make a new visitor experience centre, a pedestrian underpass to make safe access under state highway 6, expanding car parking, ETC.

There will be many shops attracting tourists that will gain most of the money used in the local towns and the construction.

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By Zara, Jorgen and Stella

Persuasive writing

Persuasive writing

In my opinion, I do not understand who does not not want to live
in this house because it has a great view of the mountains and the sun ,
it is so quiet and peaceful there, you could start a great farm on the beautiful land,
the house already has a fire and great insolation made from grass.

 The house is very beautiful and antique, the stone
walls surrounding the area is more natural like than
the common wood fences.It could give a fresh smell from
the plants that could grow on it. The house has
even got a fireplace to keep you warm on the cold
rainy nights. I would love to live here and I believe
everyone should at least try staying here and i think
it would be a lovely experience.

The view of the outside would be beautiful you
would see the gigantic mountains and the mysterious
and wonderful wildlife,The noises of the wilderness would
relax you. the rocks from the beach would let you extend the wall
for any pets that you want to keep in. The open mountains mean
that you would get a lot of sunlight and rain, meaning
planting fruits and vegetables would not be a bad idea
would it? And you could roast and use them in soups.

You could buy a ship and set sail to fish or set traps
overnight and to maybe catch some lobsters or crabs.
The dried leaves around the house could easily burn
up and fuel your fireplace.You could maybe set up
a rain collector to boil your vegetables, fruit and meat.
There would be no chemicals polluting your crops, it
would just be pure nature growing your crops making
it more healthy.

The amount of isolation is extraordinary it's so quiet you can hear the waves,
wind and the singing of the birds, there are no cars stinking up the place with
their fumes, no people smoking or throwing their bottles away and the only
trash that is there is your own.

I would not think of anyone that does not want to live
here there is a view of the mountains and the sun, the
sea would be a great source of meat from fishing, the
land would be great to farm vegetables and fruits, the
amount of silence is so peaceful all you hear is the
wind, birds and waves.

The Impact of the Great Walk

      |_ The impact of the great walk_|

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I believe that the great walk would be a fantastic
idea and attract the attention of locals and tourists.

I am certain the amount of job opportunities 
for people is amazing. There are already many
jobs confirming to open like cafes,etc.There will
be souvenirs at the walk or in town. All of these
jobs need employees especially the fast food ones,
like mcdonalds dominos and kfc.

I am sure that the amount
of money that would be made
would be amazing, because of course
the tourists and locals will buy
food around the area when visiting.
The money would benefit us and help
us have more buildings and houses to be in,
and we will see new happy faces.

I personally think the popular
companies might get attention
and sell their items we may see new
food/drinks, even! New buildings and
maybe new events in the towns.

In conclusion there would be
more buildings that need
employees meaning more job
opportunities. The amount of money
gained from the new buildings
and the walk would benefit our town
and government. I personally
think some of the popular companies
around the world would take notice
and sell their stuff in the market

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